Animals in shirts are fine but I believe only work (and only just pass) on a repetitive scale if they are for example the logo ie. Paul Frank and the monkey. at this stage, yes... it is just another tiger. The dark blue background is a no. Too many colours
I think the problem for you at this moment in time is that you've way over-saturated the field with the "animals in swirly lines" concept. I think one per year is probably the most the market can hold at this point. As far as this particular tshirt - I think you need to start putting some time into the concept stage. You've got 5 colors here for what? It's the head of a tiger with the wallpaper from my sister's old bedroom circa 1987. I think you could have made this work if: you used more linework, varied the line more, rendered it better and then used the color to accelerate the tiger. There's just no unifying elements aside from sloppy illustrator brushes (and don't say that was the intent) As I mentioned earlier, it might be time to give up on the animals and lines work, but in a couple years - when we're ready for another one, I'm confident you will have a stronger showing.
nope
not that good
looks sloppy to me.
A bit over done, both size and colour. If it was smaller it would probably work better.
maybe a little smaller on the chest. but i love the design.
If it came in yellow, I'd buy it
Animals in shirts are fine but I believe only work (and only just pass) on a repetitive scale if they are for example the logo ie. Paul Frank and the monkey. at this stage, yes... it is just another tiger. The dark blue background is a no. Too many colours
yeah... it is just another tiger...
I liked the last tiger better.
I'm over the tigers.
I do like the scaleof it though - that's pretty nice.
I think the problem for you at this moment in time is that you've way over-saturated the field with the "animals in swirly lines" concept. I think one per year is probably the most the market can hold at this point. As far as this particular tshirt - I think you need to start putting some time into the concept stage. You've got 5 colors here for what? It's the head of a tiger with the wallpaper from my sister's old bedroom circa 1987. I think you could have made this work if: you used more linework, varied the line more, rendered it better and then used the color to accelerate the tiger. There's just no unifying elements aside from sloppy illustrator brushes (and don't say that was the intent) As I mentioned earlier, it might be time to give up on the animals and lines work, but in a couple years - when we're ready for another one, I'm confident you will have a stronger showing.